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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Jom needs to start betting differently.

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Brian Heming's avatar

Maybe, but given that Veldin failed to get the girl for at least an entire year DESPITE saving her life in his very first scene, I sympathize with his odds-making. Besides, someone has to take the other side of the bet, or it's just no fun.

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

It’s a bit like Waiting for Godot. You can’t always get heads. Until you do.

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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

Your second book is off to a great start.

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Brian Heming's avatar

Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad the intro-recap-romance worked well.

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