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TheRanting PokeGirl's avatar

I love the way the mmc is talking about his LI and the way he remembers their kiss and how they held hands

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Mercedes de Santiago's avatar

Added to the Link Festival! I'm glad you're continuing the story.

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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

This is shaping up nicely. I can't wait to see what happens at the big battle, and afterwards.

The "triangle" between Vel, Aloree, and Soriana could get interesting. What is a prince to do?

If this were an anime, he'd start a harem.

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Am I caught up? Probably time to subscribe, huh.

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Brian Heming's avatar

Thanks for the fast-as-lightning read-through and thanks especially for all the feedback you gave on the way!

All caught up. If you really liked it, please give it an Amazon review!

Happy Easter!

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Happy Easter!! Hope the feedback was ok and that you know that someone is me the reader and not you the writer!

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

“Some of it” not “someone”. I really should check before pressing send.

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Brian Heming's avatar

This fantasy story is strictly monogamous! It is, of course, possible (or at least, so far not claimed impossible) for two differently-numbered Prince Vels to walk around, which would solve the problem without polygamy, but have other issues.

Anyway if you're interested in thinking about that, I'd love to share the draft of the intro chapter to book 3 with you and get your thoughts on what final ending you'd prefer.

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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

Harem's weren't always about sex. Zenobia was in a Seraglio (Harem), but she wasn't touched, and fell in love with Conan from afar.

The biblical kings had concubines, which more times than not, never saw the King.

It's only Japanese anime that make Harems all about sex or sexual tension.

Of course with the sexual tension between Vel and Soraina, it's possible it could lead to sex.

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