You're welcome to! But honestly, the one I'd most like feedback on is the unpublished beginning of book 3, if you're up for it. Let me know and I'll send you a link!
It’s pretty minor. I had difficulty distinguishing Empire ships from “our ships”. Before they moved into narrower quarters, it felt like they took action on themselves? As for the other, send me a DM. It might take me a little while to get to it — and let me know what you’re looking for / worried about?
Would you like a little feedback on this one?
You're welcome to! But honestly, the one I'd most like feedback on is the unpublished beginning of book 3, if you're up for it. Let me know and I'll send you a link!
It’s pretty minor. I had difficulty distinguishing Empire ships from “our ships”. Before they moved into narrower quarters, it felt like they took action on themselves? As for the other, send me a DM. It might take me a little while to get to it — and let me know what you’re looking for / worried about?