The Lives of Velnin

Brian Heming

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Chapter 1 - The Black Citadel's End

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Brian Heming

Feb 17

Thanks! The trick is to read people who write action better than oneself, and try to be even close to as good. Still a long way to go!

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Oooh multiple incarnations! Off to read chapter 2!

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You write action so well! I'm taking notes...

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Brian Heming - author and pulp fiction fan

The Lives of Velnin